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I thought I saw you walking down the street today;
You were surrounded by a bunch of the pack;
Your smile was broad,
and your laugh was the same.

And I dropped my books so I could run back to you;
because I knew it couldn't be true-
but there you were again;
that same smile;
that same laugh....
The same thinly wound arms....

And then I caught up to you....
And I reached out;
but it wasn't you.

It was an impersonator;
and I felt my face and heart crumble.

He wasn't you; no.
But he did see it-
the hurt, the pain... the betrayal....
and...

Just as though he were you,
he wrapped me up and let me cry...

Because he knew me;
even though he didn't know me....

His friends watched like we were nuts-
we had no idea who we were to one another;
yet here he stood,
letting me cry and scream your name....

It seems that even after I've accepted your death;
you still make your way into my heart.

I've let myself move on;
I've let myself fall into love;
I've found that dream person you always told me about....

But today, when 'You' were on the street
I forgot about everything...

Because my life had turned back over a year and a half...
And you were still warm.
still alive.
still there for me...
and still laughing...

I miss you.
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So here's your holiday, I hope you enjoy it this time

Inspired by a real event.

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:icondaggereyes:
This is so beautiful and sad, such expression of emotion. It's woven together so tightly - it all fits into place, goes together. Even throughout all the sadness in this piece, there is still happiness. Mainly with this part,
I've let myself move on;
I've let myself fall into love;
I've found that dream person you always told me about...
. :hug:
It's nice to read about something which shows that there is hope even in the darkest times. :)

--
Feuer und Wasser kommt nie zusammen
Kann man nicht binden sind nicht verwandt

- Feuer und Wasser - Rammstein -

~lindik ~haus-of-rammstein ~Richards-Emigration
:iconlynkwulf:
Very interesting poem u have there.

--
You're only young once....
But u can be immature forever.

Proud Link and Pikminlink fan

Wants to be a great cosplayer like my idle. ^_^

Every time u say Ganondorf, god kills a fairy...Plz, think of the fairies....
:iconbrave-toastless-loki:
Wow, thank you so much for your kind words; This was actually how I felt immediately after the incident; and I just started writing it. I'm glad it's gotten a positive response.

--
Alpha Female- Don't screw with a pack.
Life is like a game of cards.
The hand that is dealt you represents determinism;
the way you play it is free will.

「Jawaharal Nehru 」
:icondaggereyes:
You're welcome. :hug:Hope you stay strong.

--
Feuer und Wasser kommt nie zusammen
Kann man nicht binden sind nicht verwandt

- Feuer und Wasser - Rammstein -

~lindik ~haus-of-rammstein ~Richards-Emigration
:iconkibaftw:
I bawwww'd. ;-;

--
Why would I live in the real world when I could live in mine?
PHEAR MY REALITY!

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